Without You (Original Song)

Mon, Dec 3, 2012 at 6:05 PM By: Countrygirl95

Hey guys! This is an original song that I wrote (its a little depressing sorry about that) and I just recently wrote after all the family problems that I've been going through. I hope you guys like it! Comment!

*I should probably mention that its not finished right? :P Im still working on it but tell me what you think!*

Without You (Dad's Song)

(Verse 1)
That marriage vow twenty years ago
Where you said you'd love us and never let go
Well where is it now?
All the words unspoken
Another promise broken

(Verse 2)
DId you build us up just to break us down
Tried to keep us calm on the cold hard ground
Well why would you babe? Why...
And I'm trying to stay numb
But you make it just so hard

(Chorus)
And in my head I'm five again in the place I called home and it was perfect babe
And in my head everything is great cause its beautiful and I'm far away from misery babe
But then the cold seeps in and the fears creep in and I'm lost and so confused
Cause nothing is perfect, perfect without you

(Verse 4)
Try to keep all my feelings bottled up inside
But its just so hard when I hear Mom crying on the bathroom floor oh,oh
It's so hard to push you far away
Cause you come back begging and I fade to gray getting over you and your selfish moods
All the words unspoken
Another promise broken

(Chorus)
And in my head I'm five again in the place I called home and it was perfect babe
And in my head everything is great cause its beautiful and I'm far away from misery babe
But then the cold seeps in and the fears creep in and I'm lost and so confused
Cause nothing is perfect, perfect without you

(Bridge)
All the screaming and crying and false goodbyes
All the "I love you"'s that sound like lies
I don't know what to do
I'm so lost and confused
All the pity gifts and covered up lies
With your selfish smirk and dishonest eyes
I don't know what to do
I'm so lost and confused

(Chorus)
And in my head I'm five again in the place I called home and it was perfect babe
And in my head everything is great cause its beautiful and I'm far away from misery babe
But then the cold seeps in and the fears creep in and I'm lost and so confused
Cause nothing is perfect, perfect without you

No not without you
No

  1. Fearlessly_Red13 avatar

    On Sat, Mar 23, 2013 at 8:41 PM, Fearlessly_Red13 said:

    Amazing

  2. tantanswiftie_013 avatar

    On Wed, Feb 6, 2013 at 11:10 PM, tantanswiftie_013 said:

    So like it :D

  3. marysowers13 avatar

    On Fri, Feb 1, 2013 at 11:35 AM, marysowers13 said:

    Wow Iike it <3

  4. RedFan avatar

    On Sat, Jan 5, 2013 at 3:28 PM, RedFan said:

    Amazing! :)

  5. TwinkleSwift avatar

    On Mon, Dec 3, 2012 at 6:25 PM, TwinkleSwift said:

    This is pretty good. :)

  6. littlekidwithglasses avatar

    On Mon, Dec 3, 2012 at 6:12 PM, littlekidwithglasses said:

    SOO BEAUTIFUL!

  7. adaira_swift13 avatar

    On Mon, Dec 3, 2012 at 6:12 PM, adaira_swift13 said:

    i think its good honestly im not a song writer but i tried to but im just not good but that was pretty good and thats the truth

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