Without You (Original Song)
Hey guys! This is an original song that I wrote (its a little depressing sorry about that) and I just recently wrote after all the family problems that I've been going through. I hope you guys like it! Comment!
*I should probably mention that its not finished right? :P Im still working on it but tell me what you think!*
Without You (Dad's Song)
(Verse 1)
That marriage vow twenty years ago
Where you said you'd love us and never let go
Well where is it now?
All the words unspoken
Another promise broken
(Verse 2)
DId you build us up just to break us down
Tried to keep us calm on the cold hard ground
Well why would you babe? Why...
And I'm trying to stay numb
But you make it just so hard
(Chorus)
And in my head I'm five again in the place I called home and it was perfect babe
And in my head everything is great cause its beautiful and I'm far away from misery babe
But then the cold seeps in and the fears creep in and I'm lost and so confused
Cause nothing is perfect, perfect without you
(Verse 4)
Try to keep all my feelings bottled up inside
But its just so hard when I hear Mom crying on the bathroom floor oh,oh
It's so hard to push you far away
Cause you come back begging and I fade to gray getting over you and your selfish moods
All the words unspoken
Another promise broken
(Chorus)
And in my head I'm five again in the place I called home and it was perfect babe
And in my head everything is great cause its beautiful and I'm far away from misery babe
But then the cold seeps in and the fears creep in and I'm lost and so confused
Cause nothing is perfect, perfect without you
(Bridge)
All the screaming and crying and false goodbyes
All the "I love you"'s that sound like lies
I don't know what to do
I'm so lost and confused
All the pity gifts and covered up lies
With your selfish smirk and dishonest eyes
I don't know what to do
I'm so lost and confused
(Chorus)
And in my head I'm five again in the place I called home and it was perfect babe
And in my head everything is great cause its beautiful and I'm far away from misery babe
But then the cold seeps in and the fears creep in and I'm lost and so confused
Cause nothing is perfect, perfect without you
No not without you
No










Comments
On Sat, Mar 23, 2013 at 8:41 PM, Fearlessly_Red13 said:
Amazing
On Wed, Feb 6, 2013 at 11:10 PM, tantanswiftie_013 said:
So like it :D
On Fri, Feb 1, 2013 at 11:35 AM, marysowers13 said:
Wow Iike it <3
On Sat, Jan 5, 2013 at 3:28 PM, RedFan said:
Amazing! :)
On Mon, Dec 3, 2012 at 6:25 PM, TwinkleSwift said:
This is pretty good. :)
On Mon, Dec 3, 2012 at 6:12 PM, paintsplatteredteardrops said:
SOO BEAUTIFUL!
On Mon, Dec 3, 2012 at 6:12 PM, TaylorSLongLive said:
i think its good honestly im not a song writer but i tried to but im just not good but that was pretty good and thats the truth