Liveinlove05 wrote:
Heyy! I'm anna(: Here's my entry!!

This song that I recently wrote is basically about trying to not pay so much attention to the opposition I've been getting , and just take it in with what you feel by yourself without letting the outside influence affect you because after all it is your own life.

Our Story

We're laying upstairs in that bed
just trying to make sense of this mess
when just yesterday
we were arguing
screaming
and I'd never felt so low
as you get so frustrated
that you throw
your keys right out of that parked car window
and I just want you to know//

{Chorus}:
That I'm not going anywhere
and I'm this close to doing absolutly anything
just to get whats fair
and now all I know is you and me
and that I'm not gonna give this up
for anything
they should just let us be
cause this is our story
and we're in this together baby//

You called me cause you felt so bad
about the way we left off
and I love that you thought about me enough
to come and pick me up
face to face we talk
and we're gonna figure this out together
but right now I'd rather let you know...

{Chorus}:
That I'm not going anywhere
and I'm this close to doing absolutly anything
just to get whats fair
and now all I know is you and me
and that I'm not gonna give this up
for anything
they should just let us be
cause this is our story
and we're in this together baby//
{Bridge}:

We're at the start of our lives
and one day there won't have to be a fight
for this love
cause we'll know what we're made of
cause baby this our story//

{Outro}: so tonight I'm just lying here in bed thinking about us together a scene plays out in my head, and its now our story//

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sparklexxx wrote:
this is my song i wrote while day dreaming about what it would be like to fall in love in a surprising way. So i wrote this a bout a couple who meet at a party. They then cant stop thinking about each other but they never even exchanged names! so its just how their story starts and how love can be spontaneous, fun and crazy.
Ive never had a boyfriend before so i just day dream about what it would be like and how it would feel to fall so hard for someone that you've never met but have this instant connection! please tell me what you think it would mean the world to me

To Our Story

Lights and streamers hung in trees
You walk to me and I nearly faint
Never met but want to
You hold my hand
And whisper
“Come with me we’re going to soar tonight”

We danced danced danced to the best of the drum
We sang sang sang to the lyrics of the song
We dreamed dreamed dreamed like we were five
We were falling falling falling for one another
It was that birthday that changed our lives

Three seasons rolled on by and yet
I still dream of that July night
I had a blast of a time
My mama tells me
“Girl you’re too young
To know what forever is” but with you I see it

We danced danced danced to the best of the drum
We sang sang sang to the lyrics of the song
We dreamed dreamed dreamed like we were five
We were falling falling falling for one another
It was that birthday that changed our lives

Just as I start losing faith
There’s a knock on my door
You’re on my porch and you tell me
“girl I don’t know your name or who you are
But I need to know you and I’m still dreamin’ of ya
Since that late July night
Will you trust me and take my hand?
And we can soar like we did that night?”
And under the starlight on my front lawn

We danced danced danced to the best of the drum
We sang sang sang to the lyrics of the song
We dreamed dreamed dreamed like we were five
We were falling falling falling for one another
The birthday was only the first page
Only the first page
To our story



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lovelykate13 wrote:
round 1:
I wrote this about my "first love" or so I thought.
L-U-V by Katie Thing

blue eyes,
blond hair
what a sin
and I dared
to try to Love
for the fIrst time
but at thirteen,
i was so blind

he was enchanting
and i fell hard
when i should have Kept up my guard

and thEy told me
don't fall for him
and they told me
Don't let him in

You spelled lOve like l-U-v
which makes me think you never loved me
it was a red flag
that it would go Bad
and unfortunatEly
you never
l-o-v-e-d...m-e

well who knew That i'd get so obsessed
and fall righT in
i'd nEver guessed my fiRst kiss
Would Haunt mE
five years arouNd the bend

I diDn't lIsten
when they tolD me
don't fall for him
theN he showed me
exacTly
what they meant

you spelled love liKe l-u-v
which makes me think you Never lOved me
it Was a red flag
that it would go bad
and unfortunately
you never
l-o-v-e-d...m-e

and now you're married
gonna start a new life with her
and i'm stuck with the flashbacks
of how we were

the i remember...

You spelled love like l-u-v
which makes me think yOu never loved me
it was a red flag
that it would go bad
and unfortunately
yoU spelled love like l-u-v
which makes me think you never loved me
it was a red flag
that it would go bad
and unfortunately
i feel like you could
never
ever
l-o-v-e
anybody


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"I didn't say half the things I wanted to"

SwiftieHipster95 wrote:
I wrote this song about a boy who has trouble letting a girl in, because he has real feelings for her but he was once hurt really bad and now he feels all those feelings rushing back when he meets this new girl. The thing is the girl knows what is going on in his head, and this is her feelings about it...



Tonight

Verse 1:
A storm is moving in
You never let me in
I can't help but wonder whats on your mind
I'm searching for a clue
I'm waiting for the queue
For you to let me in

Pre Chorus:
Everything is wrong
Nothing is right
You cannot see the light
But I know whats on your mind

Chorus:
You're out in the dark
searching for me
And everything we could be
Wonder if anyone sees the
real you besides me
I can't tell you if they do
I can't tell you if they will
Just walk me home tonight

Verse 2:
The rain clouds are filling up the sky
The street lights are our only light
The stars are hiding behind the black clouds tonight
Your searching for an answer of whats wrong
And whats right
Trying to decide if you should fight
These feelings that have come over you

Pre Chorus:
Everything is wrong
Nothing is right
You cannot see the light
But I know whats on your mind

Chorus:
You're out in the dark
searching for me
And everything we could be
Wonder if anyone sees the
real you besides me
I can't tell you if they do
I can't tell you if they will
Just walk me home tonight

Bridge:
You've fought these feelings you've had
For so long
It all comes rushing out like a downpour
From the clouds
You reach in closer grab my hand
Run your fingers through my hair
Everyone around us stops and stares

End Verse:
You take my hand and walk me home tonight


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