Hey y'all, so MegSwift18 and I have been working on a song for a few weeks, and we just can't seem to get a chorus for it! We have three stanzas at the moment and have decided on 2 stanzas for each verse, but we really would like to work on the chorus.

It's a song about liking somebody who's just so toxic to you and you wish you didn't like them, but you do.

If I post the stanzas we have here, do you think y'all could suggest something? :)
Hey baby, your words hit me like a bullet in the chest
Your personality spreads like blood on my vest
You're so obnoxious makes me feel insecure
And I don't know how you do it but you got me wanting more

I can never reach your attention no matter how hard I try
Every time I fail it feels like there's a knife in my side
You'd never notice me even if I screamed it out loud
And even then all you'd do is knock me down

I need you like an organ but all you do is cut me off
You'd let me bleed to death and you'd never try to stop
You'd leave me alone in the dark with nobody to hold
Then take an axe to my back and never tell a soul


Graphic made by me and TaylorFanDenmark :)

Want to read an extract from my diary?http://taylorswift.com/forum/off_topic/2280602#post_18534653