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    Re: Songwriters opinions on songs I wrote?

    Thu, Dec 20, 2012 at 2:34 PM


    Secret Message: I didn't see it coming, didn't you know I'd notice It sometime?
    Inspired by: This song was inspired by one of my "best" friends. We have been through hard times together and I thought we were going to be best friends for a long time, until i noticed the other day that she is just like my old "friends", who use me for what I have not who I am.

    VERSE 1:
    Set on replay
    Like all my country records
    The puzzle pulls together now
    Its all making sense and starts to play again
    On that December 19th

    PRE-CHORUS:
    You walk to my door in the cold air
    And I'm feeling like you just disappear
    As you talk about everything but me
    Don't you know better than to just leave me here

    CHORUS:
    And your head goes back, laughing
    With no care in the world but her
    I'm only a stupid game to play when you want to win
    You tell me that we're forever
    But babe, seasons change
    When the change comes along, you take it
    And back up as I fall
    Being used, used, used of it all.

    VERSE 2:
    Seasons change just like you
    I'm falling like an old leaf off an autumn tree
    All the hard times we shared together
    I didn't think you'd do this to me
    I thought we were forever, ever
    You're just like a replica of MGT

    CHORUS:
    And your head goes back, laughing
    With no care in the world but her
    I'm only a stupid game to play when you want to win
    You tell me that we're forever
    But babe, seasons change
    When the change comes along, you take it
    And back up as I fall
    Being used, used, used of it all.

    BRIDGE:
    I never thought this would happen to me
    All over again
    Not knowing what to do anymore
    Just losing one more friend

    CHORUS:
    And your head goes back, laughing
    With no care in the world but her
    I'm only a stupid game to play when you want to win
    You tell me that we're forever
    But babe, seasons change
    When the change comes along, you take it
    And back up as I fall
    Being used, used, used of it all.

    OUTRO:
    You walk to my door in the cold air
    And I'm feeling like you just disappear
    So don't leave me here
    Being used, used, used.

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    Re: Songwriters opinions on songs I wrote?

    Thu, Dec 20, 2012 at 5:06 PM


    Secret Message: We fall, get back up, and fall again, but this time, only harder.
    Inspired by: This song was inspired sort of by what I feel every now and then. Its about someone telling you that you are beautiful and that you don't see one speck of it when you look in the mirror. Its sort of like "Tied Together With A Smile".

    VERSE 1:
    You turn to me and ask "Hey what's wrong?"
    A minute passes by and it seems like a song
    "Nothing" I reply
    Keeping it all on the inside

    PRE-CHORUS:
    How can you ever be yourself
    When someone tells you to be someone else
    its so hard to stand tall and ignore them all

    CHORUS:
    You tell me I'm beautiful In my own kind of way
    To open my eyes and try to find the beauty shine inside
    Cause they wanna bring me down
    Make me fall to the ground
    You say "Babe, don't listen to what they say"
    I wish that I could believe the same
    But through these eyes theres a different name

    VERSE 2:
    The long locks and thin thoughts
    Its all I ever want
    Pictures dancing around in my head
    While flipping through a magazine
    The tears start to shed and I ask myself "Why can't I look like them?"

    CHORUS:
    You tell me I'm beautiful In my own kind of way
    And to open my eyes and see the beauty inside
    Cause they wanna bring me down
    Make me fall to the ground
    You say "Babe, don't listen to what they say"
    I wish that I could believe the same
    But through these eyes theres a different name

    BRIDGE:
    I'm thinking you're right
    Maybe I should start to accept myself
    I try, but I can't even sleep at night
    Cause all I want to be is pretty

    CHORUS:
    You tell me I'm beautiful In my own kind of way
    And to open my eyes and see the beauty inside
    Cause they wanna bring me down
    Make me fall to the ground
    You say "Babe, don't listen to what they say"
    I wish that I could believe the same
    But in these eyes theres a different name

    OUTRO:
    You tell me what I want to hear
    But why don't I believe it?
    All i want to be is perfect
    I see differently through these eyes

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    Re: Liv's Song Book

    Thu, Dec 20, 2012 at 6:45 PM

    OMS YOU'RE AWESOME!!! I sang the songs, so I think i've created a melody!!! :D you're really good, I love both!

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    Re: Songwriters opinions on songs I wrote?

    Thu, Dec 20, 2012 at 6:47 PM

    TaylorBelongsWithMe13 wrote:
    OMS YOU'RE AWESOME!!! I sang the songs, so I think i've created a melody!!! :D you're really good, I love both!



    Thank you so much!! Hahah thats great :)
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    Re: Constructive Critism on Songs I wrote?

    Thu, Dec 20, 2012 at 9:28 PM

    THISSSSSSSSSSS IS FREAKING AMAZING

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    Re: Constructive Critism on Songs I wrote?

    Thu, Dec 20, 2012 at 9:46 PM

    omg it's great, maybe you should record it?! it would be awesome :)
    hi :)

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    Re: Constructive Critism on Songs I wrote?

    Fri, Dec 21, 2012 at 7:39 AM

    They're both really great, really! We'd all love to hear what they sound like, so please, please, please record them so we can all hear!

    Sorry, BTW, about the topics that inspired both songs. You ARE beautiful, Liv, so don't let the mean artificial friends get you down!
    Illinois Country Fan





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    Re: Constructive Critism on Songs I wrote?

    Fri, Dec 21, 2012 at 3:24 PM

    Illinois Country Fan wrote:
    They're both really great, really! We'd all love to hear what they sound like, so please, please, please record them so we can all hear!

    Sorry, BTW, about the topics that inspired both songs. You ARE beautiful, Liv, so don't let the mean artificial friends get you down!
    Illinois Country Fan



    Thank you!! I will try to get a melody or chords down for them both over Winter Break :)



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    Re: Constructive Critism on Songs I wrote?

    Fri, Dec 21, 2012 at 3:32 PM

    I really, really like both of them. You definitely have talent, sweetheart :) Keep it up, never stop writing!


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    Re: Constructive Critism on Songs I wrote?

    Sat, Dec 22, 2012 at 11:43 AM

    LongLiv wrote:

    Secret Message: We fall, get back up, and fall again, but this time, only harder.
    Inspired by: This song was inspired sort of by what I feel every now and then. Its about someone telling you that you are beautiful and that you don't see one speck of it when you look in the mirror. Its sort of like "Tied Together With A Smile".

    VERSE 1:
    You turn to me and ask "Hey what's wrong?"
    A minute passes by and it seems like a song
    "Nothing" I reply
    Keeping it all on the inside

    PRE-CHORUS:
    How can you ever be yourself
    When someone tells you to be someone else
    But its so hard to stand tall and ignore them all

    CHORUS:
    You tell me I'm beautiful In my own kind of way
    To open my eyes and try to find the beauty shine inside
    Cause they wanna bring me down
    Make me fall to the ground
    You say "Babe, don't listen to what they say"
    I wish that I could believe the same
    But in these eyes theres a different name

    VERSE 2:
    The long locks and thin thoughts
    Dancing around in my head
    While flipping through a magazine
    When the tears start to shed, why can't I look like them

    CHORUS:
    You tell me I'm beautiful In my own kind of way
    And to open my eyes and see the beauty inside
    Cause they wanna bring me down
    Make me fall to the ground
    You say "Babe, don't listen to what they say"
    I wish that I could believe the same
    But through these eyes theres a different name

    BRIDGE:
    I'm thinking you're right
    Maybe I should start to accept myself
    I try, but I can't even sleep at night
    Cause all I want to be is perfect

    CHORUS:
    You tell me I'm beautiful In my own kind of way
    And to open my eyes and see the beauty inside
    Cause they wanna bring me down
    Make me fall to the ground
    You say "Babe, don't listen to what they say"
    I wish that I could believe the same
    But in these eyes theres a different name

    OUTRO:
    You tell me what I want to hear
    But why don't I believe it?
    All i want to be is perfect
    I see differently through these eyes


    This is amazing, I LOVE the pictures at the top. My one criticism is that it rhymes a bit too often, but other than that, amazing!

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    Sun, Dec 23, 2012 at 12:14 PM

    The songs are awesome!


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    Re: Songwriters opinons on songs I wrote?

    Sun, Dec 23, 2012 at 12:16 PM

    I really like both of those songs. Mind blowing.




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    Re: Songwriters opinons on songs I wrote?

    Sun, Dec 23, 2012 at 5:43 PM

    Very talented, and i would like to hear the melody along with the lyrics, now i'm curious!
    One of my friends is a songwriter too, and she'll be posting some original music in time to come
    if you are interested please sub to her youtube channel =D
    here is one of her T-Swift Covers
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    Re: Songwriters opinons on songs I wrote?

    Wed, Dec 26, 2012 at 12:42 PM


    Secret Message: In life you have to accept what happened and just continue living.
    Ispired by: This song was inspired by 4 different people. They were all my best friends and one day they all left me in the cold for no reason at all. They hurt me really bad, but I knew that I just had to move on and forget about it. In 20 years I'm not going to remember the names of 5 girls who hurt me really bad.

    VERSE 1:
    I guess you'll never see the pain
    You caused everyday
    You could write a book on
    How to ruin my day
    You don't even see all the different
    scars you left
    While you were standing there, taking all my best

    PRE-CHORUS:
    When It's bright you make it grey
    and the sunshine fades away
    I thought It was obvious
    But I guess you'll never see it
    How did I not notice
    Everything you did?

    CHORUS:
    Cause now its over
    But I've just gotta stay strong
    The best memory we had, from March 31st
    Is now just the past, wish I saw it first
    You left me like a penny in the rain
    You thought I was fine
    Baby just know yeah my smiles' faded,
    But I'm moving on

    VERSE 2:
    Wednesday came along, after you moved
    I listened carefully and saw right through
    All your lies and laughter
    It felt like my whole life shattered.

    CHORUS:
    Cause now im tryin' to end it all
    But I've just gotta stay strong
    I thought the memories were made right then
    But turned out I was wrong
    You left me like a penny in the rain
    You thought I was fine
    Baby just know yeah my smiles' faded,
    But I'm moving on

    BRIDGE:
    Looks like you won the game
    Cause you got your fame when you hurt me
    But babe don't come running back
    Because I'll be gone fast

    CHORUS:
    Cause now im tryin' to end it all
    But I've just gotta stay strong
    I thought the memories were made right then
    But turned out I was wrong
    I think its funny how you think i'm still sad
    But babe look what I have
    A new best friend to hold me along
    Yeah you hurt me but here I am
    I'm moving on

    OUTRO:
    So happy that your gone
    Im moving on
    Im moving on
    Oooh Im moving on

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    Re: Songwriters opinons on songs I wrote?

    Wed, Dec 26, 2012 at 12:46 PM

    Wow, you're pretty good! Only thing I would suggest is that your rhyming is uneven and the syllables don't match so it doesn't flow very well, but I can see that you will easily be able to improve!



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    Re: Songwriters opinons on songs I wrote?

    Wed, Dec 26, 2012 at 12:47 PM

    OOh I like that one.(^) definitely my favourite :D

    PLEASE CAN WE CO-WRITE?!

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    Re: Songwriters opinons on songs I wrote?

    Wed, Dec 26, 2012 at 1:20 PM

    TypicalTuesdayNight wrote:
    Wow, you're pretty good! Only thing I would suggest is that your rhyming is uneven and the syllables don't match so it doesn't flow very well, but I can see that you will easily be able to improve!



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    Ok thank you so much! I really appreciate it :) I'll try to work on that lol ;)

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    Re: Songwriters opinons on songs I wrote?

    Wed, Dec 26, 2012 at 1:20 PM

    JJ13 wrote:
    OOh I like that one.(^) definitely my favourite :D

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    Yes of course, I'd love to!!

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    Re: Songwriters opinons on songs I wrote?

    Wed, Dec 26, 2012 at 1:22 PM

    LongLiv wrote:
    JJ13 wrote:
    OOh I like that one.(^) definitely my favourite :D

    PLEASE CAN WE CO-WRITE?!

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    Yes of course, I'd love to!!


    Yayyyyy!! Pm me :D


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    Re: Songwriters opinons on songs I wrote?

    Wed, Dec 26, 2012 at 2:29 PM


    Secret Message: Don't bite the hand that feeds you, honey.
    Inspired by: One of my really good ex friends. I told her all my problems and I thought that she was there for me, but turns out, she wasn't. Then a week later she bailed on my with all my other so called "friends" and treated me like crap. Then the next month she turned back to me like I was a shoulder to cry on and she wanted me to be there for her..Um, yeah right.

    VERSE 1:
    You call me up on that cold December night
    Apparently you need me now
    I heard the message that you left when you called

    PRE-CHORUS:
    You really think I'm gonna be there
    After all the times you falsely said you were there for me
    All the words you said drowned out by the rain
    Waiting there for me but I never came
    Your worlds a little colder, how?
    Just know that I'm not coming back now

    CHORUS:
    And here you are at my door
    Throwing pebbles
    I guess nobody told you
    I'm not gonna be here for you
    And so you waited, frustrated
    Who's gonna hold you?
    I'm not here
    I'm not there
    For you

    VERSE 2:
    You need me now, babe do you remember what you did?
    Said you'd keep your promise but you never did
    You need me now
    You really think I'm gonna be there
    After all you did to me, hey thats not fair
    Heres a heads up, everything has changed
    Just go ahead and forget my name

    CHORUS:
    And here you are at my door
    Throwing pebbles
    I guess nobody told you
    I'm not gonna be here for you
    And so you waited, frustrated
    Who's gonna hold you?
    I'm not here
    I'm not there
    For you

    BRIDGE:
    I honestly can't stand her anymore
    Is what you said
    But baby be careful what you say
    Cause one little word can change someone's whole day
    Haven't you heard the words
    Give what you want in return?
    (And after all you did to me, you expect me to help you?)

    CHORUS:
    And here you are at my door
    Throwing pebbles
    I guess nobody told you
    I'm not gonna be here for you
    And so you waited, frustrated
    Who's gonna hold you?
    I'm not here
    I'm not there
    For you

    OUTRO:
    And you should've thought before you spoke
    Now look where you are
    Left all alone in the dark

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