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Re: Songwriters opinions on songs I wrote?

Secret Message: I didn't see it coming, didn't you know I'd notice It sometime?
Inspired by: This song was inspired by one of my "best" friends. We have been through hard times together and I thought we were going to be best friends for a long time, until i noticed the other day that she is just like my old "friends", who use me for what I have not who I am.
VERSE 1:
Set on replay
Like all my country records
The puzzle pulls together now
Its all making sense and starts to play again
On that December 19th
PRE-CHORUS:
You walk to my door in the cold air
And I'm feeling like you just disappear
As you talk about everything but me
Don't you know better than to just leave me here
CHORUS:
And your head goes back, laughing
With no care in the world but her
I'm only a stupid game to play when you want to win
You tell me that we're forever
But babe, seasons change
When the change comes along, you take it
And back up as I fall
Being used, used, used of it all.
VERSE 2:
Seasons change just like you
I'm falling like an old leaf off an autumn tree
All the hard times we shared together
I didn't think you'd do this to me
I thought we were forever, ever
You're just like a replica of MGT
CHORUS:
And your head goes back, laughing
With no care in the world but her
I'm only a stupid game to play when you want to win
You tell me that we're forever
But babe, seasons change
When the change comes along, you take it
And back up as I fall
Being used, used, used of it all.
BRIDGE:
I never thought this would happen to me
All over again
Not knowing what to do anymore
Just losing one more friend
CHORUS:
And your head goes back, laughing
With no care in the world but her
I'm only a stupid game to play when you want to win
You tell me that we're forever
But babe, seasons change
When the change comes along, you take it
And back up as I fall
Being used, used, used of it all.
OUTRO:
You walk to my door in the cold air
And I'm feeling like you just disappear
So don't leave me here
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Secret Message: We fall, get back up, and fall again, but this time, only harder.
Inspired by: This song was inspired sort of by what I feel every now and then. Its about someone telling you that you are beautiful and that you don't see one speck of it when you look in the mirror. Its sort of like "Tied Together With A Smile".
VERSE 1:
You turn to me and ask "Hey what's wrong?"
A minute passes by and it seems like a song
"Nothing" I reply
Keeping it all on the inside
PRE-CHORUS:
How can you ever be yourself
When someone tells you to be someone else
its so hard to stand tall and ignore them all
CHORUS:
You tell me I'm beautiful In my own kind of way
To open my eyes and try to find the beauty shine inside
Cause they wanna bring me down
Make me fall to the ground
You say "Babe, don't listen to what they say"
I wish that I could believe the same
But through these eyes theres a different name
VERSE 2:
The long locks and thin thoughts
Its all I ever want
Pictures dancing around in my head
While flipping through a magazine
The tears start to shed and I ask myself "Why can't I look like them?"
CHORUS:
You tell me I'm beautiful In my own kind of way
And to open my eyes and see the beauty inside
Cause they wanna bring me down
Make me fall to the ground
You say "Babe, don't listen to what they say"
I wish that I could believe the same
But through these eyes theres a different name
BRIDGE:
I'm thinking you're right
Maybe I should start to accept myself
I try, but I can't even sleep at night
Cause all I want to be is pretty
CHORUS:
You tell me I'm beautiful In my own kind of way
And to open my eyes and see the beauty inside
Cause they wanna bring me down
Make me fall to the ground
You say "Babe, don't listen to what they say"
I wish that I could believe the same
But in these eyes theres a different name
OUTRO:
You tell me what I want to hear
But why don't I believe it?
All i want to be is perfect
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OMS YOU'RE AWESOME!!! I sang the songs, so I think i've created a melody!!! :D you're really good, I love both!
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Re: Songwriters opinions on songs I wrote?
OMS YOU'RE AWESOME!!! I sang the songs, so I think i've created a melody!!! :D you're really good, I love both!

Thank you so much!! Hahah thats great :)
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Re: Constructive Critism on Songs I wrote?
THISSSSSSSSSSS IS FREAKING AMAZING

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omg it's great, maybe you should record it?! it would be awesome :)
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Re: Constructive Critism on Songs I wrote?
They're both really great, really! We'd all love to hear what they sound like, so please, please, please record them so we can all hear!
Sorry, BTW, about the topics that inspired both songs. You ARE beautiful, Liv, so don't let the mean artificial friends get you down!
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Re: Constructive Critism on Songs I wrote?
They're both really great, really! We'd all love to hear what they sound like, so please, please, please record them so we can all hear!
Sorry, BTW, about the topics that inspired both songs. You ARE beautiful, Liv, so don't let the mean artificial friends get you down!
Illinois Country Fan

Thank you!! I will try to get a melody or chords down for them both over Winter Break :)

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Re: Constructive Critism on Songs I wrote?
I really, really like both of them. You definitely have talent, sweetheart :) Keep it up, never stop writing!
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Secret Message: We fall, get back up, and fall again, but this time, only harder.
Inspired by: This song was inspired sort of by what I feel every now and then. Its about someone telling you that you are beautiful and that you don't see one speck of it when you look in the mirror. Its sort of like "Tied Together With A Smile".
VERSE 1:
You turn to me and ask "Hey what's wrong?"
A minute passes by and it seems like a song
"Nothing" I reply
Keeping it all on the inside
PRE-CHORUS:
How can you ever be yourself
When someone tells you to be someone else
But its so hard to stand tall and ignore them all
CHORUS:
You tell me I'm beautiful In my own kind of way
To open my eyes and try to find the beauty shine inside
Cause they wanna bring me down
Make me fall to the ground
You say "Babe, don't listen to what they say"
I wish that I could believe the same
But in these eyes theres a different name
VERSE 2:
The long locks and thin thoughts
Dancing around in my head
While flipping through a magazine
When the tears start to shed, why can't I look like them
CHORUS:
You tell me I'm beautiful In my own kind of way
And to open my eyes and see the beauty inside
Cause they wanna bring me down
Make me fall to the ground
You say "Babe, don't listen to what they say"
I wish that I could believe the same
But through these eyes theres a different name
BRIDGE:
I'm thinking you're right
Maybe I should start to accept myself
I try, but I can't even sleep at night
Cause all I want to be is perfect
CHORUS:
You tell me I'm beautiful In my own kind of way
And to open my eyes and see the beauty inside
Cause they wanna bring me down
Make me fall to the ground
You say "Babe, don't listen to what they say"
I wish that I could believe the same
But in these eyes theres a different name
OUTRO:
You tell me what I want to hear
But why don't I believe it?
All i want to be is perfect
I see differently through these eyes
This is amazing, I LOVE the pictures at the top. My one criticism is that it rhymes a bit too often, but other than that, amazing!
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Re: Songwriters opinons on songs I wrote?
The songs are awesome!

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Re: Songwriters opinons on songs I wrote?
Very talented, and i would like to hear the melody along with the lyrics, now i'm curious!
One of my friends is a songwriter too, and she'll be posting some original music in time to come
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Re: Songwriters opinons on songs I wrote?

Secret Message: In life you have to accept what happened and just continue living.
Ispired by: This song was inspired by 4 different people. They were all my best friends and one day they all left me in the cold for no reason at all. They hurt me really bad, but I knew that I just had to move on and forget about it. In 20 years I'm not going to remember the names of 5 girls who hurt me really bad.
VERSE 1:
I guess you'll never see the pain
You caused everyday
You could write a book on
How to ruin my day
You don't even see all the different
scars you left
While you were standing there, taking all my best
PRE-CHORUS:
When It's bright you make it grey
and the sunshine fades away
I thought It was obvious
But I guess you'll never see it
How did I not notice
Everything you did?
CHORUS:
Cause now its over
But I've just gotta stay strong
The best memory we had, from March 31st
Is now just the past, wish I saw it first
You left me like a penny in the rain
You thought I was fine
Baby just know yeah my smiles' faded,
But I'm moving on
VERSE 2:
Wednesday came along, after you moved
I listened carefully and saw right through
All your lies and laughter
It felt like my whole life shattered.
CHORUS:
Cause now im tryin' to end it all
But I've just gotta stay strong
I thought the memories were made right then
But turned out I was wrong
You left me like a penny in the rain
You thought I was fine
Baby just know yeah my smiles' faded,
But I'm moving on
BRIDGE:
Looks like you won the game
Cause you got your fame when you hurt me
But babe don't come running back
Because I'll be gone fast
CHORUS:
Cause now im tryin' to end it all
But I've just gotta stay strong
I thought the memories were made right then
But turned out I was wrong
I think its funny how you think i'm still sad
But babe look what I have
A new best friend to hold me along
Yeah you hurt me but here I am
I'm moving on
OUTRO:
So happy that your gone
Im moving on
Im moving on
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Re: Songwriters opinons on songs I wrote?
Wow, you're pretty good! Only thing I would suggest is that your rhyming is uneven and the syllables don't match so it doesn't flow very well, but I can see that you will easily be able to improve!


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Re: Songwriters opinons on songs I wrote?
Wow, you're pretty good! Only thing I would suggest is that your rhyming is uneven and the syllables don't match so it doesn't flow very well, but I can see that you will easily be able to improve!


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Secret Message: Don't bite the hand that feeds you, honey.
Inspired by: One of my really good ex friends. I told her all my problems and I thought that she was there for me, but turns out, she wasn't. Then a week later she bailed on my with all my other so called "friends" and treated me like crap. Then the next month she turned back to me like I was a shoulder to cry on and she wanted me to be there for her..Um, yeah right.
VERSE 1:
You call me up on that cold December night
Apparently you need me now
I heard the message that you left when you called
PRE-CHORUS:
You really think I'm gonna be there
After all the times you falsely said you were there for me
All the words you said drowned out by the rain
Waiting there for me but I never came
Your worlds a little colder, how?
Just know that I'm not coming back now
CHORUS:
And here you are at my door
Throwing pebbles
I guess nobody told you
I'm not gonna be here for you
And so you waited, frustrated
Who's gonna hold you?
I'm not here
I'm not there
For you
VERSE 2:
You need me now, babe do you remember what you did?
Said you'd keep your promise but you never did
You need me now
You really think I'm gonna be there
After all you did to me, hey thats not fair
Heres a heads up, everything has changed
Just go ahead and forget my name
CHORUS:
And here you are at my door
Throwing pebbles
I guess nobody told you
I'm not gonna be here for you
And so you waited, frustrated
Who's gonna hold you?
I'm not here
I'm not there
For you
BRIDGE:
I honestly can't stand her anymore
Is what you said
But baby be careful what you say
Cause one little word can change someone's whole day
Haven't you heard the words
Give what you want in return?
(And after all you did to me, you expect me to help you?)
CHORUS:
And here you are at my door
Throwing pebbles
I guess nobody told you
I'm not gonna be here for you
And so you waited, frustrated
Who's gonna hold you?
I'm not here
I'm not there
For you
OUTRO:
And you should've thought before you spoke
Now look where you are
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