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Song Reviews!
My name is Krystal.
Ever since I opened up my own songwriting contest, (http://taylorswift.com/forum/off_topic/2281822/page/1?r=18060732#post_18060732) I realized I LOVE reading other peoples songs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ALL you need to do is post a song of yours here and I'll review it!
THIS is what I'll use to review it :)
Uniqueness: /13 because
Lyrics: /13 because
Creativity: /13 Because
Extra: /13 because
Secret Message: (If there is one) /13 because
As you can see, I will rate you out of 13.
You may post a song for me to review at any time!
Thanks!
The image above is NOT mine. I just found it online :D
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Re: Song Reviews!
Can you review this one? thanks!: There is some what of a hidden message in the first verse;)
But whatever
V1
You make fun of me,
say that I'm the wrong shade
of pretty. What with my,
dark blue hair and my ash
blonde eyes. You act careless,
wondering what would happen if.
Getting yourself in to all kinds of trouble.
Chorus
It such a shame that I'll take the blame,
for you, once again. I should say no to
taking the hit for you, but I can't. I wish
that I had never came to your rescue, but
whatever, it doesn't matter either way
V2
I should care less about you,
but I don't. You would never look
twice at me, if i didn't, promise to take
all the falls. All those falls, they're
the ones that broke all my bones,
The ones that left me here alone.
Chorus
It such a shame that I'll take the blame,
for you, once again. I should say no to
taking the hit for you, but I can't. I wish
that I had never came to your rescue, but
whatever, it doesn't matter either way
Bridge
I can't believe how much
it hurts, the feeling of
nothing anymore.
b]Chorus
It such a shame that I'll take the blame,
for you, once again. I should say no to
taking the hit for you, but I can't. I wish
that I had never came to your rescue, but
whatever, it doesn't matter either way
Outro
It's such a shame either way.
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Re: Song Reviews!
Please could you review this? Ignore the capitals haha, it's the message XD And please could you PM me the results? Thank you :3
I Just Like Hanging Out With You
the first time i saw you, you were in bright blue uniform again
looking around nervously, i guess you didn't know anyone then
at last you see somebody and you smile that crazy smile you always do
it makes me laugh just seeing you so happy to be here, to be with you
crazy times and crazy people, i guess this is getting deep but
i just like hanging out with you
laughing again, i guess i just like being with you
Jumping around, i guess we're just like little kids and
i hope you will remember me when we're both old and grey
i know you're my best friend
people rOll their eyes and say, a girl and a guy can't just be friends
but we'll just prove them wrong, bouncing around time and again
i guess to be honest we act like sugaR rushed kids
but that's the way we like it, no more serious than this
crazy times and crazy people, i guess this is getting Deep but
i just like hanging out with you
lAughing again, i guess i just like being with you
jumping around, i guess we're just like little kids and
i hope you will remember me when we're both old and grey
i know you're my best friend
and when things get too serious we always start to fight, but
another joke about today makes everything better
our friends just roll their eyes and say "they're at it again," but
i guess we'll be like this forever more, forever more
i just like hanging out with you
laughing again, i guess i just like being with you
jumping around, i guess we're just like little kids and
i hope you will remember me when we're both old and grey
i know you're my best frieNd
i hope you'll remember me way in the future
i hope we'll keep bouncing around like now
i hope we'll stay as close as we are now together
I hope you'll alwayS be MY BEST FRIEND
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Re: Song Reviews!
My name is Krystal.
Ever since I opened up my own songwriting contest, (http://taylorswift.com/forum/off_topic/2281822/page/1?r=18060732#post_18060732) I realized I LOVE reading other peoples songs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ALL you need to do is post a song of yours here and I'll review it!
THIS is what I'll use to review it :)
Uniqueness: /13 because
Lyrics: /13 because
Creativity: /13 Because
Title: /13 because
Extra: /13 because
Secret Message: (If there is one) /13 because
Tips(?):
As you can see, I will rate you out of 13.
You may post a song for me to review at any time!
Thanks!
The image above is NOT mine. I just found it online :D
The image above is NOT mine. I just found it online :D
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Re: Song Reviews!
Uniqueness: 8 /13 because I have heard several songs like it...
Lyrics: 11/13 because I can really relate to them, surprisingly :)
Creativity: 7/13 Because again, I have heard several songs like it.
Title: 6/13 because it is just some lyrics from Stay Stay Stay
Secret Message: (If there is one) 12 /13 because you took the time to make them and it's good quality. :)
Tips(?): Try to go out there and write songs with other people. Maybe that'll be easier :)
THANKS FOR REQUESTING A REVIEW!
Please could you review this? Ignore the capitals haha, it's the message XD And please could you PM me the results? Thank you :3
I Just Like Hanging Out With You
the first time i saw you, you were in bright blue uniform again
looking around nervously, i guess you didn't know anyone then
at last you see somebody and you smile that crazy smile you always do
it makes me laugh just seeing you so happy to be here, to be with you
crazy times and crazy people, i guess this is getting deep but
i just like hanging out with you
laughing again, i guess i just like being with you
Jumping around, i guess we're just like little kids and
i hope you will remember me when we're both old and grey
i know you're my best friend
people rOll their eyes and say, a girl and a guy can't just be friends
but we'll just prove them wrong, bouncing around time and again
i guess to be honest we act like sugaR rushed kids
but that's the way we like it, no more serious than this
crazy times and crazy people, i guess this is getting Deep but
i just like hanging out with you
lAughing again, i guess i just like being with you
jumping around, i guess we're just like little kids and
i hope you will remember me when we're both old and grey
i know you're my best friend
and when things get too serious we always start to fight, but
another joke about today makes everything better
our friends just roll their eyes and say "they're at it again," but
i guess we'll be like this forever more, forever more
i just like hanging out with you
laughing again, i guess i just like being with you
jumping around, i guess we're just like little kids and
i hope you will remember me when we're both old and grey
i know you're my best frieNd
i hope you'll remember me way in the future
i hope we'll keep bouncing around like now
i hope we'll stay as close as we are now together
I hope you'll alwayS be MY BEST FRIEND
The image above is NOT mine. I just found it online :D
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Re: Song Reviews!
Wow, I really like this one! :)
Lyrics: 11/13 because I really liked them!!!!!!!!!! Every here and there I found a weak line, but overall the lyrics were pretty good!!!
Creativity: 8/13 Because "But Whatever" reminds me a lot of "Like Ever"
Title: 8/13 reason above
Secret Message: (If there is one) 7/13 because it's only in the first verse and it's hard to find.
Tips(?): Maybe reading your song a couple of times before finishing it is a good idea. Put yourself in a strangers shoes! :)
THANKS
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Can you review this one? thanks!: There is some what of a hidden message in the first verse;)
But whatever
V1
You make fun of me,
say that I'm the wrong shade
of pretty. What with my,
dark blue hair and my ash
blonde eyes. You act careless,
wondering what would happen if.
Getting yourself in to all kinds of trouble.
Chorus
It such a shame that I'll take the blame,
for you, once again. I should say no to
taking the hit for you, but I can't. I wish
that I had never came to your rescue, but
whatever, it doesn't matter either way
V2
I should care less about you,
but I don't. You would never look
twice at me, if i didn't, promise to take
all the falls. All those falls, they're
the ones that broke all my bones,
The ones that left me here alone.
Chorus
It such a shame that I'll take the blame,
for you, once again. I should say no to
taking the hit for you, but I can't. I wish
that I had never came to your rescue, but
whatever, it doesn't matter either way
Bridge
I can't believe how much
it hurts, the feeling of
nothing anymore.
b]Chorus
It such a shame that I'll take the blame,
for you, once again. I should say no to
taking the hit for you, but I can't. I wish
that I had never came to your rescue, but
whatever, it doesn't matter either way
Outro
It's such a shame either way.
http://farm5.staticflickr.com/4124/5007375742_450694c4c8_z.jpg[\IMG][/signature][/quote]
[signature][/signature] [img="http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s432/PhotoBucketTaylorSwift/fotoflexer_photo.jpg"]
The image above is NOT mine. I just found it online :D
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Re: Song Reviews!
Review this song please? It's called Right or Wrong, hope you like it :)
Baby, all I want to know,
Is this right or is this wrong?
Baby, I know the truth,
I know where you belong.
So please just listen to me,
Please just listen well,
Right or Wrong.
So just tell me what this is,
And then pull me in close,
I'd love to hate, but you make it,
Just so damn hard to go.
From the very day I met you,
I knew you'd be mine.
They all told me I was crazy,
Because I knew I had to try.
And I'll miss you when you leave me,
Because I thought this was for good,
And I pretended to believe you,
When you told me that you would.
Baby, all I want to know,
Is this right or is this wrong?
Baby, I know the truth,
I know where you belong.
So please just listen to me,
Please just listen well,
Right or Wrong.
I may have caught you watching me,
But you found me looking back.
But i'm sad because I know,
That there are certain things I lack.
And i'm astounded by the fact that,
You'd chose me over her,
And i'm shocked because you smile at me
Like there's no other girl.
Your lips give me all the things,
That your words just won't.
And your hands teach me everything,
That I'll ever need to know.
But i'm crying cause I know there is no way that this ends well,
I promise that I'll miss your eyes, the stories that they tell.
Baby, all I want to know,
Is this right or is this wrong?
Baby, I know the truth,
I know where you belong.
So please just listen to me,
Please just listen well,
Right or Wrong.
And i'm infatuated with you, but I think it's gone too far,
Our story's like an old movie,
And the screen's fading to dark.
6 months ago, I'd not believe them,
If they told me what this'd be,
But now I have to go,
Just kiss me once, before I leave.
Baby, all I want to know,
Is this right or is this wrong?
Baby, I know the truth,
I know where you belong.
So please just listen to me,
Please just listen well,
Right or Wrong.
So just tell me what this is,
And then pull me in close,
I'd love to hate, but you make it,
Just so damn hard to go.
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Re: Song Reviews!
Uniqueness: 8 /13 because I have heard several songs like it...
Lyrics: 11/13 because I can really relate to them, surprisingly :)
Creativity: 7/13 Because again, I have heard several songs like it.
Title: 6/13 because it is just some lyrics from Stay Stay Stay
Secret Message: (If there is one) 12 /13 because you took the time to make them and it's good quality. :)
Tips(?): Try to go out there and write songs with other people. Maybe that'll be easier :)
THANKS FOR REQUESTING A REVIEW!
Please could you review this? Ignore the capitals haha, it's the message XD And please could you PM me the results? Thank you :3
I Just Like Hanging Out With You
the first time i saw you, you were in bright blue uniform again
looking around nervously, i guess you didn't know anyone then
at last you see somebody and you smile that crazy smile you always do
it makes me laugh just seeing you so happy to be here, to be with you
crazy times and crazy people, i guess this is getting deep but
i just like hanging out with you
laughing again, i guess i just like being with you
Jumping around, i guess we're just like little kids and
i hope you will remember me when we're both old and grey
i know you're my best friend
people rOll their eyes and say, a girl and a guy can't just be friends
but we'll just prove them wrong, bouncing around time and again
i guess to be honest we act like sugaR rushed kids
but that's the way we like it, no more serious than this
crazy times and crazy people, i guess this is getting Deep but
i just like hanging out with you
lAughing again, i guess i just like being with you
jumping around, i guess we're just like little kids and
i hope you will remember me when we're both old and grey
i know you're my best friend
and when things get too serious we always start to fight, but
another joke about today makes everything better
our friends just roll their eyes and say "they're at it again," but
i guess we'll be like this forever more, forever more
i just like hanging out with you
laughing again, i guess i just like being with you
jumping around, i guess we're just like little kids and
i hope you will remember me when we're both old and grey
i know you're my best frieNd
i hope you'll remember me way in the future
i hope we'll keep bouncing around like now
i hope we'll stay as close as we are now together
I hope you'll alwayS be MY BEST FRIEND
The image above is NOT mine. I just found it online :D
Haha, thank you! It was based on Stay Stay Stay :P
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Re: Song Reviews!
Can you review this? It's got a secret message :)
Maybe, just maybe
Verse one
i'd been watcHing you since the very first day
i'd been wishing yOu were mine but Wouldn't say
and it may seem Cliche
but yOUr smiLe was what got me through the day
Chorus
anD has it ever crossed your mind
that maybe, just maybe i was one of a kiNd?
and has iT ever crossed your mind
that maybe,just maybe You were the whO was blind
Verse two
could yoU have been any more blinder?
i was acting like a middle Schooler
doodling your name all over my bindEr
it couldn't of been clEarer
that i wanted you
Chorus
and has it ever crossed your mind
that maybe, just maybe i was one of a kind?
and has it ever crossed your mind
that maybe,just maybe you were the who was blind
Verse three
i wish you had known
that you had my number in your phone
i spent months lying in bed at night
wishing that you might
just call
Chorus
and has it ever crossed your mind
that maybe, just maybe i was one of a kind?
and has it ever crossed your mind
that maybe,just maybe you were the who was blind
Bridge
i was falling apart
waiting for you to let me capture your heart
i was wishing that someday
you'd take me away
somewhere beautiful, somewhere magical, somewhere we could stay
Chorus
and it never crossed my mind
that maybe, just maybe i wasn't your kind?
and it never crossed my mind
that maybe,just maybe I was the who was blind
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