Okay, here is my entry! It's about someone who has just embarrassed and confused you and tortured you inside after you found out who they really were and you just keep wishing you could go back to those lovely times before all the drama. It's called If Only Time Was Our Friend. :]

If Only Time Was Our Friend

Verse 1
Let the moon swallow me whole
You've left me alone with nowhere to go
Hope you enjoyed pulling the trigger on me
You've tattooed the word shame for everryone to see

Pre-Chorus
We lost it in the canopy of trees
Battling to find the air
One on one, just you and me
No one said love was fair

Chorus
If only today way yesterday
If only tomorrow was gone
We'd live in the past tilll we found a way
To fix everything that went wrong
Tell me this wasn't just a lesson learned
And tell me you were lying when you said "I still love her"

Verse 2
You trapped me in a cold, dark room
Where there was nothing to see
Did you really think I had a clue,
When you tried to fool me?

Pre-Chorus
We lost it in the canopy of trees
Battling to find the air
One on one, just you and me
No one said love was fair

Chorus
If only today way yesterday
If only tomorrow was gone
We'd live in the past tilll we found a way
To fix everything that went wrong
Tell me this wasn't just a lesson learned
And tell me you were lying when you said "I still love her"

Bridge
Walls and walls of silent words
I can't break down this building of hurt
Step by step I'll reach that door
Just don't come back if this hurt you more

Chorus
If only today way yesterday
If only tomorrow was gone
We'd live in the past tilll we found a way
To fix everything that went wrong
Tell me this wasn't just a lesson learned
And tell me you were lying when you said "I still love her"

Thank you. [:
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credit to kerri ;]

I'll enter with a song called Remember

(Verse 1)
You used to call my name,
You always were the same.
Now I am the one to blame,
Now I will never be able to face you again...
'Cause

(Chorus)
I lied for you,
I cried for you,
But
Please, Remember,
That day in December,
Back when the weather
Was nice and cool
When we dived in the pool
And kissed in the rain.

(Verse 2)
You used to be there for me,
You always cared for me.
Now I am the one to be
So, so, so, so, so, sorry.
'Cause

(Repeat Chorus)

(Bridge)
Now everything is in a mess,
I am now a damsel in distress...
I am wearing a dress,
But you don't love me I guess...
Unless...
You forgive me for everything I did,
Run away and go onto your ship,
Kiss me every single day,
Call me in your very special way...
'Cause

(Repeat Chorus)

Will you forgive me?
Will you live with me?
Please, if this is not to be,
Please, remember me.....
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FearlesslyEnchanted wrote:
TrueTaylorFan6814: Wow, I can't believe that's the first song you wrote! It's so good! Waayy better than the first song I wrote. :)
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Thank you Tanya!

Awwww thank you! i wrote it during English when I was reallllyyyy bored. I kinda felt like Taylor and Tim McGraw. :)
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1st and 3rd by me, 2nd and avatar by the incredibly amazing Tanya
,
Kiki

this is the very first song i ever wrote. i was talking to an old crush for the first time in a couple years and suddenly all of this just came flooding back, and before i knew it i was writing this song. it's called your eyes. i hope you like it :)


it feels like just days
since i last saw your face
since you grabbed my hand
and said it would be ok
and now here we are
like nothing’s changed
i’m wondering if you still remember
what happened that day

how i looked into your eyes
and saw myself in you
and how i struggled to tell you why
but it couldnt break through

your eyes
were the reason that i woke up
and your, your smile
made me feel as though i couldnt speak and
the way you looked at me
made me feel like maybe everything could change
did you ever feel that way?

i love the way you think
how i never know what you’ll say next
how you keep me on the brink
always putting me to the test and
i forgot how it feels
to smile at one of your silly jokes
to want to grab your hand
and just...go

and i still remember
the last time we talked
and now here we are again
you’ve made my life stop
‘cause

your eyes
were the reason that i woke up
and your, your smile
made me feel as though i couldnt speak and
the way you looked at me
made me think that everything could change
i wonder did you ever feel that way

and i can’t help thinking back
at everything we shared
the memories fly through my head
nothing spared
and as i sit here
i realize

your eyes
are the reason that i wake up
and your, your smile
makes me feel as though i’ll never speak and
when you look at me
i think that baby we could change

your eyes
were the reason that i woke up
and your, your smile
made me feel as though i couldnt speak and
the way you looked at me
made me think that everything could change
i wonder did you ever feel that way

tell me baby that you still feel this way.

lovelovelove