Treacherous Slope wrote:
Amazing, as usual!!!

made by autumn leaves are falling!!!

MarkmyselfandI wrote:
great song, S TAY Beautiful. Great theme. If a person is being told goodbye, they would not want it to be a long production. It only prolongs to pain of the moment.

I just thought I'd post that I fixed the first verse in "My Song" if anyone wants to check that out. I don't know if it even sounds better, it was just bothering me lol.
Have a lovely evening:-)
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-J-

This is a new song I wrote called "I Don't". It's about someone who isn't for you, but you're too in love to care. If you haven't, please subscribe to my songbook!! I will love you forever. :D

I Don't


You're complicated in the way,
Your silence fills a room.
And I don't have the room,
For that.
You're something more, with something less.
You never can take the rest,
Of everything you ever thought,
Was yours.

If I won't talk, please don't say a word.
Everything isn't better off heard.

I'd tell you how I hate you.
How you make me mad at myself.
Why you can't understand,
You ain't everything I want.
You're so hard to love,
But I try anyway.
And you need to watch your mouth.

But baby I don't.

You're moving like a note in the song,
First you're here and then you're gone,
And we are better off gone,
Than alive.
You watch the boxes on the street,
We all know, you'll leave,
Turn eighteen,
I'll watch you ditch this town.

And I won't ever wake up on your time.
But I'll say everything that's on my mind.

I'd tell you how I hate you.
How you make me mad at myself.
Why you can't understand,
You ain't everything I want.
You're so hard to love,
But I try anyway.
And you need to watch your mouth.

But baby I don't.

You're so hard to love,
That's why I, don't want to.
But I'm gonna miss you.

I'd tell you how I hate you.
How you make me mad at myself.
Why you can't understand,
You ain't everything I want.
You're so hard to love,
But I try anyway.
And you need to watch your mouth.

But baby I don't.
I wasn't taught that way.



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-J-

MarkmyselfandI wrote:
A very relevant and expressive song, S tay beautiful! My personal connecting point with the lyric is, when "I tell you that I hate you" I am saying I hate that you do not love me". Sometimes when we love, we find our image of the one in which we fall in love with to be flawed, for they cannot, and will not, love us as we had envisioned.

So this is pretty much another song about how I wanna go to Nashville. I've written tons, I go the idea for this in Social Studies and it turned out good, so I'm gonna post it. It's called the Lucky People, hope you like it. Please subscribe to my songbook and leave your comments/suggestions about my songs. Thanks!

The Lucky People

If I wished hard enough,
Filled my lungs, up with air,
Would it feel like I felt,
Back when I cared?

And I just wanna hear something good on the radio.
All the lines from all the songs that I know.

I've got a hand of four-leaf clovers,
Up in New York State with me.
And I need them to get me somewhere.
Why are all the lucky people in Tennessee?

If you knew about me,
I could take my luck and words,
But what good would that be,
If you can't change the world?

And I just wanna turn on the radio,
Without hearing static on the lines I know.

I've got a hand of four-leaf clovers,
Up in New York State with me.
And I need them to get me somewhere.
Why are the lucky people in Tennessee?

I've got a hand of four-leaf clovers,
Up here, with me.
They don't get me anywhere.
Why are all the lucky people in Tennessee?

I could drive alone.
I hear a song I know,
That could be me, oh that could be me.

Treacherous Slope wrote:
AMAZING as usual!!!!

made by autumn leaves are falling!!!